The blog is easy to read, the dear reader entry is clear and allows the reader to understand what he is doing with this blog and his project. Also the schedule is very clearly laid out. I hope that in the future you can include recordings of your music, or even pictures of the instruments your using. It is a bit hard to understand what is happening with your music when we can't hear it progress.
The American Dream and Immigrant Perspectives of America
The blog is fun to read. There is a lot of enthusiasm in the writing. If I were to critique anything, I would say that the writing could be more organized. If you were to look back at the journal to try to find an idea or a goal you had you would have to read the whole entry. Maybe that something that just matters to me, but I like the rest and I think it should help you a lot during your project!
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